Your feedback on Drumbeat’s new messaging

February 1, 2011 § 4 Comments

What headline would you put on Drumbeat’s new front page? Last week we asked for your help — and a flurry of interesting ideas came back through the mailing list and comment thread. Taken together, they provide an excellent snapshot of what Drumbeat’s all about (see the word cloud above).

Here’s a round-up of some of what I found inspiring or helpful. I’ve paraphrased for brevity in places, and changed punctuation a bit to make them consistent. The creativity of this community really inspires me. Not sure if there’s a clear winner here yet — but it’s been a terrific exercise so far. And inspired some ideas I’d like to share in a follow-up post. But for now…

Open innovation. Powered by you.

Start. Build. Play.
–Heather

Connect. Share projects. Change the world.

–Jaime

Open everything. Powered by everyone.

–Danny

Open web. Open minds. Open world.

–Miraj

Collaborate. Innovate. Commence awesomeness.

–Jessica

Embrace. Build. Share.

–Karl

Build the open web. Build the future.

–Nathaniel

Open up.

–ELS

Collaborate and grow ideas for the open web.

–Nuss

Love freedom. Build the web.

–Paul B.

Share ideas and projects. Help change the web.

–Carlo

People. Possibilities. Ideas. Think Open.

–Jade

Together, we build the web.

–Salve

Build the change you want to see in the web.

–Arnaud

Share the beat. Build the future.

–Lucy

Comments and analysis

WTF is “open” supposed to mean anyway? …Getting more people involved and excited about everything Drumbeat is means not ostracizing people who are unfamiliar with the idea of Open Web.

–Laura

Words that focus on what people *do* are better than vague adjectives. If we lead with “Build,” for instance, something like “Build the Web”, then by implication we mean the parts of the web that are open (because we’re inviting people to build it).
–Paul O.

What is Mozilla about? The web, obviously. But what else? Being new in the community, I have started to realize that at Mozilla, there is a  huge “do it!” culture. There is also the idea of non-profit, of improving “individual  empowerment.” Of a somehow humanistic view of what the web should be or do for us as users of it.

–David

Where does that leave us?

For the front page headline, I’m persuaded by Paul’s argument that words that focus on what people do (verbs) are better than adjectives and nouns. Many of the ideas people shared are great potential tag lines — but a tag line is different. Tag lines can be poetic and more aspirational — these headlines need to clearly signal what our users do here. If Foursquare is “Check in. Find friends. Unlock your city,” we need the equivalent set of verbs for Drumbeat. For me, Jaime’s use of “Connect” and “Share projects” is a breakthrough in this regard. More ideas on that in a follow-up post!

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