Your feedback on Drumbeat’s new messaging
February 1, 2011 § 4 Comments
What headline would you put on Drumbeat’s new front page? Last week we asked for your help — and a flurry of interesting ideas came back through the mailing list and comment thread. Taken together, they provide an excellent snapshot of what Drumbeat’s all about (see the word cloud above).
Here’s a round-up of some of what I found inspiring or helpful. I’ve paraphrased for brevity in places, and changed punctuation a bit to make them consistent. The creativity of this community really inspires me. Not sure if there’s a clear winner here yet — but it’s been a terrific exercise so far. And inspired some ideas I’d like to share in a follow-up post. But for now…
Open innovation. Powered by you.
Start. Build. Play.
Connect. Share projects. Change the world.
Open everything. Powered by everyone.
Open web. Open minds. Open world.
Collaborate. Innovate. Commence awesomeness.
Embrace. Build. Share.
Build the open web. Build the future.
Collaborate and grow ideas for the open web.
Love freedom. Build the web.
Share ideas and projects. Help change the web.
People. Possibilities. Ideas. Think Open.
Together, we build the web.
Build the change you want to see in the web.
Share the beat. Build the future.
Comments and analysis
Words that focus on what people *do* are better than vague adjectives. If we lead with “Build,” for instance, something like “Build the Web”, then by implication we mean the parts of the web that are open (because we’re inviting people to build it).
Where does that leave us?
For the front page headline, I’m persuaded by Paul’s argument that words that focus on what people do (verbs) are better than adjectives and nouns. Many of the ideas people shared are great potential tag lines — but a tag line is different. Tag lines can be poetic and more aspirational — these headlines need to clearly signal what our users do here. If Foursquare is “Check in. Find friends. Unlock your city,” we need the equivalent set of verbs for Drumbeat. For me, Jaime’s use of “Connect” and “Share projects” is a breakthrough in this regard. More ideas on that in a follow-up post!